2nd draft of the magazine advert

On tuesday 23rd of february, we improved on our magazine advert. we deleted captins such as 'wins tickets to T.I's concert'. As it is unnecessary to have that in the magazine advert. we are only supposed to be promoting the music. we also added reviews from radio stations we added ratings.And also we added at the buttom of our magazone advert email addresses, where fans can download the music and comment on it.